Pain to Love Chapter 3Chapter 3 School went by in a blur like usual, I slept through almost all my classes and lunch. Except for art of course. So I'm at my locker now. Alex told me to wait here at some point of the day when we passed by each other."Hey." said a voice behind me. I turn and there he is."Hi." I said quietly."Ready to go?"I nod.He grabs my wrist and pulls me to his car."You drive to school?" I ask him."Yep, get in."We get in the car and for some reason I feel the urge to cut again. Instead I take my sketchbook out and draw as he gets the car started."You ok?" he asks.I look up at him. "Oh, um yeah, drawing sometimes reduces the u
Pain to Love Chapter 2Chapter 2-The next morning-ÊSigh. Yet another school day of torture and loneliness. I find it upsetting that not even one person wants to hang out with me. I mean, I've read lots of stories where the emo kid has at least one friend. Course I guess that kid doesn't live in a small town where practically everybody is homophobic.ÊI feel the need to cut again. Maybe I should just cut deep enough on both wrist so I bleed to death. I'm tired of dealing with the pain at school. But I know that if I do that, mom would go into depression. Thinking it was her fault that she didn't act on what was happening sooner. No, I'm just gonna do t
Pain to Love Chapter 1Pain to Love Chapter 1ÊI slit my wrist yet again. And the rush comes.ÊI'm sitting in the bathtub naked in the water. I feel the pain as I watch the blood flow out of the cut go down my arm and drip into the water.ÊMy name is Kurai Chi (dark blood). I'm 17 and I'm Japanese, emo, and gay.ÊThe school I go to is a major homophobic school. I'm the only gay in the school and I get bullied all the time because of it. I actually went to the hospital a couple of times because of it.ÊI've begged my mom to move me to a different school but there isn't any other school where we live. And she can't drive me 30 miles just
Love in Nightsbane Chapter 14Demon & VampireWoo, next chapter!After reading your comments from the last chapter I suddenly had the idea for this chapter. :3Yay, quick upload!On we go!Chapter 14KuroÕs POV ÒSo who do you choose?Ó Both Blood and Master say in since. They both stare at me with anger and hope in their eyes. Anger cause theyÕre fighting, hope cause they want me to choose one. I look back and forth at them with my eyes open wide. I cannot believe this is happening. How in the world did I get into a situation like this? Well after thinking about it for a couple minutes and the fact that their stares practically burned
Love in Nightsbane Chapter 13Demon & Vampire Chapter 13Sorry it took me so long to write the next chapterÉ :3I wasnÕt sure what to do.But thereÕs a new cover up! Do you like it?Anyways on to the storyÉKuroÕs POV IÕm an angel, but how? That makes no sense! IÕm a fucking sex crazed vampire for crying out loud! I donÕt see how I can be an angel. But can I even be sure that Blood is even telling the truth? ÒBlood how can I believe you?Ó I decide to ask him. He looks at me for a couple seconds, wondering what to say. ÒHave you ever wondered why you have blue eyes even though youÕre a pure-bl
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