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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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Sta.sh
VISION you had a very nice picture!
ORIGINALITY i just put four stars because its not completey orginal u didnt make it yours by doing a background or adding scars or freckles
TECHNQUE again very well done the technique could use help but nobodies perfect
IMPACT i wasnt wowed about this piece neither disgusted i just would have like to be blown away since you have so much talent
The Sketch:
Looks quite fine, doesn't have to be a masterpiece
2-3:
I can see, that on these steps, the eyes go more and more apart from each other, it seems to be your major problem.
The coloring:
Face: you shade to much the "sides" of the nose and "ignore" the rest of the face, that makes it look awkward, also (depends on the sourrounding /light and such) the shadow has to be directed under the nose and hair.
She looks quite maskulin and a bit anorexic, because of that dark color on her cheeks.
Same because of the lips, maybe try to make the shape with colors next time
deco: needs shading .__.
maybe you can try to use different sizes of brushes, for a better result
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